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I.
We named the tree because it seemed alive:
a girl’s name. Like our mothers, she looked worried.
She had a naked arm, as if stretched from an Easter dress
over the edge of a cliff. It was big, which is really
just another word for strong. Ask anybody.
We brought the rope we found; he hid
the scissors we stole; I tied the knot,
because I was better at tying my shoes.
By the time I climbed down, used spit
to wipe the sap onto my jeans, he was gone.
And then he was back, screaming through a smile
at the joke of hanging over nothing. Risk and refuge; in and out.
II.
I arched my neck to see the Weeping Rock.
It was a periwinkle eye, smooth and slowly dripping,
stark against a bristly face of evergreen.
I stared back, strained to see the treasure I knew was there.
My brother stood silently beside me; he was looking too.
At dawn we left the trailer park. In those days,
we didn’t need excuses to peel away from the world
of rust, exhaust, and synthetic music over the dusty radio.
Boulders bordered the face, an easy climb.
By the top, we had reached the level of the sun.
We waved to it, then to the tired residents below.
Marveling at how small they seemed. On hands and knees,
We crept to the wet, sloping edge. Then, we stood.
We named the tree because it seemed alive:
a girl’s name. Like our mothers, she looked worried.
She had a naked arm, as if stretched from an Easter dress
over the edge of a cliff. It was big, which is really
just another word for strong. Ask anybody.
We brought the rope we found; he hid
the scissors we stole; I tied the knot,
because I was better at tying my shoes.
By the time I climbed down, used spit
to wipe the sap onto my jeans, he was gone.
And then he was back, screaming through a smile
at the joke of hanging over nothing. Risk and refuge; in and out.
II.
I arched my neck to see the Weeping Rock.
It was a periwinkle eye, smooth and slowly dripping,
stark against a bristly face of evergreen.
I stared back, strained to see the treasure I knew was there.
My brother stood silently beside me; he was looking too.
At dawn we left the trailer park. In those days,
we didn’t need excuses to peel away from the world
of rust, exhaust, and synthetic music over the dusty radio.
Boulders bordered the face, an easy climb.
By the top, we had reached the level of the sun.
We waved to it, then to the tired residents below.
Marveling at how small they seemed. On hands and knees,
We crept to the wet, sloping edge. Then, we stood.
Literature
Who knew
The man you visited in a dream,
The one you re-traced a half-remembered
Path for, in the off-chance of
Surprising one another again -
Polychromatic flannel and subtle sighing
Through the teeth, gently
Warm eyes softly exotic
Slavic vodka on a late summer night -
Swept by today, wearing blinders of
Deep conversation, still
Smiling with an accent
His arm around a waist
I want to sit in my room, arms wrapped around
Knees against chest in the solace of the sun,
I want to watch the endless journeys of
Sidewalk strangers from the fire escape
But it's ten to four and
There's no time to cry anymore;
Only time to join the chattering
Choir
Literature
snowbones
holding my hands over the kettle
the skin on my fingertips peels back,
like dated wallpaper,
like flowers blooming.
they're burning from the inside out,
nails turning to varnish, turning to steam,
bones click-clacking their way out;
spreading like wildfire.
the whistling stops, and
blink
and my fingers are just fingers,
ink stained, bitten nails.
sunlight streams across the kitchen,
my fingers warm and
slightly damp, i trace patterns on
steamed-up windows.
Literature
Unnecessary Rounds
In the fall I'd make unnecessary rounds
over that scuffed, speckled tile
in case you were namelessly there-
an anonymous book browser,
a stranger buying milk.
I saw all these walks of life, at noon
or at eight o'clock or nine.
The protruding stomach pregnant
with hamburger-death, stretching
at the filthy shirt with a belly button eye
(Cyclops, do you still blame Nobody?)
and the young man's thin white leg with the
long tendon swimming a delicate breast stroke
under smooth cream-skin, under the fluorescents
hairless and illuminated.
Even lonely people need groceries,
need some fuel for their night ramblings
and nail biting,
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Two episodes from my childhood. Stories about living through risk.
The idea was to add a third, and make the language and style increasingly mature with age. The third anecdote that I thought of didn't seem to add to the other two, so I left it out. I may still add it in, or a completely different one, if I think of a way to better tie it in.
The idea was to add a third, and make the language and style increasingly mature with age. The third anecdote that I thought of didn't seem to add to the other two, so I left it out. I may still add it in, or a completely different one, if I think of a way to better tie it in.
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I really like this. You did a great job of presenting these scenes. The first one especially really hit me, and I thought of all the stupid --but fun-- things that I did in my childhood. I always love a work that stirs up my own memories and emotions. Awesome!