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How to Grow

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I.
We named the tree because it seemed alive:
a girl’s name. Like our mothers, she looked worried.
She had a naked arm, as if stretched from an Easter dress
over the edge of a cliff. It was big, which is really
just another word for strong. Ask anybody.

We brought the rope we found; he hid
the scissors we stole; I tied the knot,
because I was better at tying my shoes.

By the time I climbed down, used spit
to wipe the sap onto my jeans, he was gone.
And then he was back, screaming through a smile
at the joke of hanging over nothing. Risk and refuge; in and out.

II.
I arched my neck to see the Weeping Rock.
It was a periwinkle eye, smooth and slowly dripping,  
stark against a bristly face of evergreen.
I stared back, strained to see the treasure I knew was there.
My brother stood silently beside me; he was looking too.

At dawn we left the trailer park. In those days,
we didn’t need excuses to peel away from the world
of rust, exhaust, and synthetic music over the dusty radio.

Boulders bordered the face, an easy climb.
By the top, we had reached the level of the sun.
We waved to it, then to the tired residents below.
Marveling at how small they seemed. On hands and knees,
We crept to the wet, sloping edge. Then, we stood.
Two episodes from my childhood. Stories about living through risk.
The idea was to add a third, and make the language and style increasingly mature with age. The third anecdote that I thought of didn't seem to add to the other two, so I left it out. I may still add it in, or a completely different one, if I think of a way to better tie it in.
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silent-pirate's avatar
I really like this. You did a great job of presenting these scenes. The first one especially really hit me, and I thought of all the stupid --but fun-- things that I did in my childhood. I always love a work that stirs up my own memories and emotions. Awesome!